Weekly Star Performer – October First Week
Congratulations, Deepti Bais, on winning this week’s Video Activity Challenge!
We really enjoyed watching your video on “Birthday Celebrations.” You expressed your thoughts very well and gave some thoughtful and valid reasons for why you don’t host a very big birthday party or celebrate with a large number of people. We especially liked how you explained that when there are too many people around, it becomes difficult for you to give everyone your attention. Your ideas felt honest, personal, and relatable.
You were also very expressive and confident while sharing your thoughts, which made your response engaging to watch. One area you can work on is organising your thoughts before you start speaking. Since you were thinking and speaking at the same time, there were a few moments where you took some extra time to frame your ideas, which affected the overall flow slightly.
Before speaking on a topic, try taking a few moments to mentally organise your key points. Once your thoughts are clear, you’ll find it much easier to express them smoothly and maintain a natural flow.
Overall, you did a really good job! Keep expressing yourself with the same confidence and authenticity, and with a little more preparation and regular practice, your fluency and flow will become even stronger.
